Ijiwaru na Tsukai no Netsu ni Oborete

Ummmmm I know I am not in a position to judge but I think the author san will have much success in the story if she/he would larger the story of the mom and his birth was for me like he/she didn't want to continue the story it would have been more interesting and more enjoyable all this, the chapter looks rushed and I would like to see how they plan the wedding in a more flashy way. (Don't know). The story looks rushed and everything, this book had the potential to be more famous but the work itself looks messy it had a good idea but in an unclean way. They should have put more chapters or made the chapters larger to explain in a better way how the connection happen because right now I am like Akito fall in love because he was kind and brought him? Even so, I enjoyed the book has potential but I would have put more effort into the making.

Omg I love this when will the next one come